Great work with her top, but her face looks a little funny.

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dood, she looks completely realistic! you cant expect a person to have completely perfect features

the mouth is excellently done, but its at a odd angle that goes against her facial curve, dude you could do realistic anytime you like

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This is the inherent problem with drawing/painting realism without references/photographs. I don't know who this is supposed to look like so I don't know where the face is going wrong. I thought it was the nose that was the problem, but I know a girl who has a nose that looks 2 sizes too small for her face. If I had painted her then I'm sure people would have said "her nose is too small". I think if I had left it rough and painterly looking then the viewer wouldn't pick up on the slight imperfections (The mind fills in the details...)

As for the mouth, I kind of like it when a girl has a slightly crooked smile, so i was probably (subconsciously) heading towards that look. I guess I didn't pull it off..!

I will probably hate this in a couple of weeks time and remove it... I'm beginning to regret posting it already.

Thanx for faving (even though it looks wrong). Your very loyal. ^_^

The top was the easy part. She was going to be topless, but I changed my mind. But thinking about it, a great pair of breasts would have taken the focus off her face!

Please read the reply to 's comment about the face.

I've a fiddle with her face. Do you think she looks better? ^_^

I had a fiddle. Does she look better?

Yes, that is better. I think it was something to do with the angle of the face compared to her head, but the new look seems to have sorted it out.

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oh no, dont regret putting this up! its amazing far better then i could do, and the colouring, is flawless at that. Sry i forget to complement when i crit but im critting because of being Capitan Obvious.

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the mouth is definitally more level, but i open this image up in paint and tinkered, i found was it was her mouth is too far over to her right. i can show you the File if you want

well i faved it because it was just that good, im not going to say "OH ONE FLAW, im not faving"

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"I am, Capi-tan Obvious."
"There is no problem 300 zerglings cant solve."